<Wu Pao-chun Studies EMBA>
(1)
Recently, the news about the master baker Wu Pao-chun (吳寶春), who applied for Taiwan's EMBA (including NCCU!!)but was rejected because he didn't have a college degree, has caused lots of people's discussion.
→也可以這樣說，The news, ..., has received lots of attention.
(2)
the high educational system should offer them some practical and related lessons to help them gain what they really want.
→高教：the higher education system
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<new language leads to a new life??>
(1)
Down there is the website of the language
→網址如下：The link is below.
(2)
Well, that is because it is the user-friendly side, the real computer world can appear just click the right side of your mouse and there will be a button that says "code" , press it and you will see the real world .
→可以試著改成這樣說，比較簡潔，原句似乎有些太直接中文翻譯了。if you want to see what the computer really reads, you can click on the button says "code"
(3)
Thats because, since google is a big corporation which contains the both client and sever part of the computer(client-server are the model that has been inherited since the computer have invented)
→Kevin，一些小細節還是不要漏掉喔。
a. That's
b. server 伺服器
c. client-server is
d. the computer has been invented
(4)
Now, with this new language, since google is a giant in the internet world, the influence of google would be huge.
If google use its own language and solve the difficult problem, i think the internet world will change.
→仔細看這個句子有些怪怪的，
a. with this new language→ the influence of google would be huge 這二者好像沒有直接關係。
b.所以前後兩句可以合在一起，例如：Now, with this new language invented by Google, the Internet giant, some of the difficult problems will be solved and the Internet world will change.
Sunday, March 31, 2013
Saturday, March 23, 2013
Language notes (W1)
<Learning Partner From China>
(1)
學伴：buddy
I joined the buddy program in our school and met lots of new friends from abroad.
(2)
Someone told me that there was a survey which showed the majority of Chinese exchange student are not recommended their friends or family to study in Taiwan, because they feel Taiwanese students are not competitive.
-> Someone told me that there was a survey which showed that most Chinese exchange students were not recommending their friends or family members to study in Taiwan. The reason was that they felt Taiwanese students were not competitive.
a. the majority of students are : 代表一群學生中的多數，故為複數後接are；若為the majority party雖然概念上是由多個人組成，但其實是一個整體，故為單數後接is。
b. 推薦別人，故用Ving接在be-verb後。
c. 原句because是指"Someone told me that there was a survey"(因為which後面是指survey的內容)？似乎不是，故可修訂為上述。
(3)
In the future, we all need to compare with teenagers not only in our country but also China even the whole world.
-> In the future, we all need to face the challenge from others.
a. 和同儕比較，同儕和你一樣會長大！所以不一定限於teenagers。
b. 可考慮修正為上述，更為精簡。當然，若要強調來自特定地方的挑戰，也可再敘明。
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<New restaurants>
(1)
Though almost everybody says that NCCU is a good food desert; however, I think there are still some nice and not-very-expensive places to eat at here.
-> Although nearly everyone says that there's no great food around NCCU, there are some nice and not-very-expensive places to eat here.
a. 「雖然...但是」的用法，英文不同於中文，通常僅用一邊。
b. food desert很貼切，若要說政大附近是food desert，可說...it is a food desert here in NCCU, ...
(2)
滇味廚房, where I first went to last Wednesday surprises me very much. 滇味廚房 is a Yunnan-style restaurant which mainly provides rice-made noodle: 米線 and 粑吧絲 in different flavor. I enjoyed their pork 粑粑絲 (NT 65) a lot. Instead of being as soft as rice, 粑粑絲 has a springy texture. The soup is also special. The red appearance makes it seems to be spicy, but actually it is made with tomatoes, so it sours in a perfect way and has nothing to do with spicy.
a. springy texture 用的很好。
b. 動詞要不要加s，還是是要用過去式，寫作上還是要注意一下。例如
c. 用番茄做的，it is made from tomatoes.
(1)
學伴：buddy
I joined the buddy program in our school and met lots of new friends from abroad.
(2)
Someone told me that there was a survey which showed the majority of Chinese exchange student are not recommended their friends or family to study in Taiwan, because they feel Taiwanese students are not competitive.
-> Someone told me that there was a survey which showed that most Chinese exchange students were not recommending their friends or family members to study in Taiwan. The reason was that they felt Taiwanese students were not competitive.
a. the majority of students are : 代表一群學生中的多數，故為複數後接are；若為the majority party雖然概念上是由多個人組成，但其實是一個整體，故為單數後接is。
b. 推薦別人，故用Ving接在be-verb後。
c. 原句because是指"Someone told me that there was a survey"(因為which後面是指survey的內容)？似乎不是，故可修訂為上述。
(3)
In the future, we all need to compare with teenagers not only in our country but also China even the whole world.
-> In the future, we all need to face the challenge from others.
a. 和同儕比較，同儕和你一樣會長大！所以不一定限於teenagers。
b. 可考慮修正為上述，更為精簡。當然，若要強調來自特定地方的挑戰，也可再敘明。
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<New restaurants>
(1)
Though almost everybody says that NCCU is a good food desert; however, I think there are still some nice and not-very-expensive places to eat at here.
-> Although nearly everyone says that there's no great food around NCCU, there are some nice and not-very-expensive places to eat here.
a. 「雖然...但是」的用法，英文不同於中文，通常僅用一邊。
b. food desert很貼切，若要說政大附近是food desert，可說...it is a food desert here in NCCU, ...
(2)
滇味廚房, where I first went to last Wednesday surprises me very much. 滇味廚房 is a Yunnan-style restaurant which mainly provides rice-made noodle: 米線 and 粑吧絲 in different flavor. I enjoyed their pork 粑粑絲 (NT 65) a lot. Instead of being as soft as rice, 粑粑絲 has a springy texture. The soup is also special. The red appearance makes it seem
a. springy texture 用的很好。
b. 動詞要不要加s，還是是要用過去式，寫作上還是要注意一下。例如
c. 用番茄做的，it is made from tomatoes.
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