<Wu Pao-chun Studies EMBA>
(1)
Recently, the news about the master baker Wu Pao-chun (吳寶春), who applied for Taiwan's EMBA (including NCCU!!)but was rejected because he didn't have a college degree, has caused lots of people's discussion.
→也可以這樣說,The news, ..., has received lots of attention.
(2)
the high educational system should offer them some practical and related lessons to help them gain what they really want.
→高教:the higher education system
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<new language leads to a new life??>
(1)
Down there is the website of the language
→網址如下:The link is below.
(2)
Well, that is because it is the user-friendly side, the real computer world can appear just click the right side of your mouse and there will be a button that says "code" , press it and you will see the real world .
→可以試著改成這樣說,比較簡潔,原句似乎有些太直接中文翻譯了。if you want to see what the computer really reads, you can click on the button says "code"
(3)
Thats because, since google is a big corporation which contains the both client and sever part of the computer(client-server are the model that has been inherited since the computer have invented)
→Kevin,一些小細節還是不要漏掉喔。
a. That's
b. server 伺服器
c. client-server is
d. the computer has been invented
(4)
Now, with this new language, since google is a giant in the internet world, the influence of google would be huge.
If google use its own language and solve the difficult problem, i think the internet world will change.
→仔細看這個句子有些怪怪的,
a. with this new language→ the influence of google would be huge 這二者好像沒有直接關係。
b.所以前後兩句可以合在一起,例如:Now, with this new language invented by Google, the Internet giant, some of the difficult problems will be solved and the Internet world will change.
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